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dear boy:
right now a girl is
remembering too many painful conversations
about why exactly she is
stripping the feathers from her wings with sharp-edged poetry
and watching the slashes bleed words.
right now a girl is
brainstorming what she could have done better
and doing exactly the opposite
for wounded wings breed perversity.
and who knows, maybe that girl is
also thinking about the aquamarine eyes
that tempted her to flit higher
until her wings remembered they're raw and broken
then snapped and let her fall like icarus into a stormy sea.
and it's a sure thing that that girl limps home later
and reads Shakespeare with a razor blade as a bookmark.
my dear boy,
please keep a better eye on her in the future.
if there is one.
maybe that girl is me.
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If that girl is you, you must have been an Angel once. :)
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm still an angel, just one that fell :P
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Even better, a fallen angel. Bored to death in Heaven, all alone in Hell, on this world you're torn. :)
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh my god was that a bvb reference
ok can you be my best buddy forever and ever? XD
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol you listen to BVB too? XD Total coincidence man. But sure, best buds forever. :D
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woohoo, do you like seagulls? (andy likes seagulls XD)
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude, seagulls inspired me to write Wings. How can I hate them? XD
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that's epic
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