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have i ever told you that you make me smile?
high praise, i know, coming from me,
it's high praise indeed because i have a jumbled
up head and you make me smile and i
maybe even found someone who will stay this
time and maybe i even found someone who
will love me as much as i love them (it
slipped out that night you almost gave
up, almost threw in the towel, almost took the
pills you've been saving) and i know
i wouldn't be able to live without you and
i know i may have to and darling, it
scares me it fucking scares me.
just listen to that... my heart is racing like millions of
butterflies are trapped and running around a ferris wheel
screaming let me out let me
out
because my head is jumbled up and i need
you near me and your arms around me and my hands in
your hair and darling your new haircut looks
fine and do you really think i would
leave you over something so silly as
botched bangs and shorter hair?

because no matter how much you fluster
me oh god i dont know how i could last two
weeks without you
never mind
the rest of my silly teenage life.
three sentences, mixed up metaphors, and so much neediness.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent title. I love this, very stream-of-consciousness and raw and just honest. :heart:
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, i was pretty agitated when i wrote this and it really showed XD
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think some of the best poetry is when you get a taste of how the author is feeling. So I really enjoyed it.
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And yet the ending fits perfectly. I love the title by the way. :D
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just-get-over-it Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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